Zippo
Cadet
Twisted fire starter
Posts: 88
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Post by Zippo on Aug 20, 2011 15:56:54 GMT -5
It has come to my attention that my first attempts as a writer were kind of Fail. I guess being the writer of my own posts; they were perfectly understandable to me but not nearly understandable enough to others. However I have been having a ball of a time here and I really want to remedy this situation.
To that end I will omit Zippo’s stutter when he talks, he still has the stutter, I just won’t write it except in the narrative for now.
Second, I promise to work more on my sentence structure.
Lastly, if anyone has any comments, criticism or suggestions regarding my writing, please shoot me a PM, I’m all ears, my ego can take the pounding and I really want to learn because I’ve found writing to be so much fun.
-Jim.
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